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22 Haz 2022
Şiirlerim Nasıl Olmuş
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Bu başlığa vidio eklemek için telefonundaki
dio uygulamasından
giriş yap!
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Başlangıç itibariyle güzel şiirlerin var zamanla kendini geliştireceğine inanıyorum.
Hece vezni ve kafiye konusunda şiirlerin üzerinde biraz daha çalışmaya ihtiyacın var.
Çalışmalarında başarılar diliyorum.
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Yeni başlayan birine göre fena değil bence. Eksik yönleri de var tabi ama, onları da çalışarak halledebilirsin. Bi de sana naçizane bi abi tavsiyesi; Insanların bu konudaki olumsuz fikirlerine bence çok da kulak asma. Eğer bu konuya gerçekten merakin varsa kesinlikle devam et.
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şiirler başlangıç için gayet iyi bence de.
bu nasıl çirkin bir yazıdır sjsksksn
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